你的英语作文是不是这样的？
It is a good book. He is a good student. This is a good idea. I had a good time.
“good”出现了4次，但读完什么感觉？——空洞、简单、毫无画面感。
📊 厦门灯塔威廉老师批改数据： 在我批改的 200+ 篇初中英语作文中，一篇150词的作文平均出现 3.8 次”good”和 2.2 次”very”。换掉其中50%的泛泛用词后，文章质量评分平均提升 2-3 分。
“good”的替代方案
| 场景 | 用什么替代”good” | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| 书/电影 | fascinating, inspiring, thought-provoking | This is a fascinating book that I couldn’t put down. |
| 学生/员工 | outstanding, excellent, remarkable | He is an outstanding student who always goes the extra mile. |
| 机会 | valuable, golden, rare | This is a valuable opportunity to learn from experts. |
| 想法 | brilliant, creative, innovative | That’s a brilliant idea! How did you come up with it? |
| 体验 | enjoyable, memorable, rewarding | I had a memorable experience volunteering at the shelter. |
| 食物 | delicious, tasty, mouth-watering | The homemade pasta was absolutely delicious. |
”bad”的替代方案
| 场景 | 用什么替代”bad” | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| 天气/环境 | terrible, unpleasant, harsh | The harsh winter made travel nearly impossible. |
| 影响 | negative, harmful, detrimental | This habit has a harmful effect on your health. |
| 行为 | inappropriate, unacceptable, disgraceful | Such inappropriate behavior will not be tolerated. |
| 心情 | awful, miserable, dreadful | She felt miserable after failing the exam. |
| 质量 | poor, inferior, substandard | The product was of inferior quality and broke quickly. |
更高级的替换：“very + adj”的升级
“very good”可以用一个词搞定：
| 不要写 | 替换为 |
|---|---|
| very good | excellent / superb / outstanding |
| very bad | terrible / awful / appalling |
| very big | enormous / gigantic / immense |
| very small | tiny / minute / minuscule |
| very fast | rapid / swift / lightning-fast |
| very slow | sluggish / gradual / leisurely |
| very happy | overjoyed / ecstatic / thrilled |
| very sad | devastated / sorrowful / heartbroken |
| very tired | exhausted / drained / worn out |
| very important | crucial / vital / essential |
词汇积累的正确方法
很多学生的问题不是”没背过”，而是”背了不会用”。试试这个积累本方法：
三栏积累本：
| 泛泛词 | 升级词 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| good | remarkable | He made remarkable progress in just three months. |
| like | adore / admire | I admire her determination and perseverance. |
| important | critical | Sleep is critical for brain development. |
| get | obtain / acquire | She acquired valuable skills through practice. |
使用规则： 每天记住3-5组，每组必须写一个自己的原创例句。只有出现在你笔头下的词，才是你真正掌握的词。
考场速查
考试的时候不要追求”所有地方都用高级词”。把关键位置用上就好：
- 开头段的第一句——用1-2个好词抓住老师的注意力
- 每个段落的中心句——用精准词汇传达核心观点
- 结尾段的总结——画龙点睛之笔
一句话：关键位置用好词，其他地方保证准确。 准确率 + 亮点词 = 高分作文。
📌 相关推荐： 如果你想了解更多常见词汇（如”happy""sad""big""small”）的同义替换，推荐阅读 《英语写作提分秘籍：告别”good”和”bad”，用好同义替换让作文上一个档次》 —— 从good/bad扩展到20+基础词汇的升级方案，帮你全面告别”词汇贫乏”。
厦门灯塔 · 专业英语作文逐句批改 | 微信 linstudio799 专注中高考/雅思写作 · 累计批改300+篇 · 逐句精批 + 逻辑重构 + 母语级升级